*I sent “Eminent Domain” through Grammarly Premium. Looking over those marks, I recommended a few changes, based on correctness and a little sentence structure. I do not plan to look over this story again.
*Michael, would you like me to do a GP (Premium) look at Doll with Scorch Mark Eyes? Some of the suggestions coming out of that program are really good.
*I edited Crate 214. I like the physical description that Tom added at the end. I enjoyed reading it. It moves quickly, which is good. Most of the suggestions that I made address clarity and varied word choice. At this point, I am struggling to find a term that I can substitute for “door” and that is not “portal”, which would sound weird.